Since I'm an admin (apparently so)

So I've decided

Hiatus.

For us to go drink tea, smoke, chit chat, and have a good game of polo

Got to love the polo

Tally-ho!

Also for people to sort out what in Azul is happening

Frankly I have no clue

Go on Bertha, you can do it

I've have noticed repeated comments in the cbox, stuff like 'Editor pwnz dornel' or 'ownz dornelz'. This isn't very constructive feedback now... Since most of you (my so called critics) like Chris' version, I'm going to change my writing style a bit (No, I am definitly not going to do it shakespearen style). I will accomplish this by pumping my works full of descriptive stuff, which I'm semi/moderatly-good at. I know the characters don't have much depth, and the whole thing is a bit empty right now, I'll be working on that.

Expect this

Guys, please. This is only like a draft written by a 14/15 year old student (in Sec 3). Don't take it like it's a book by some experienced writer like J.K. Rowling, etc. You all 'know' that I haven't had much experience in writing stories.

To Chris: Are we ever going to see anything up here? xD. I remember you were working on something last time, how about putting it here? =). My friends seem to be digging what you write, so why don't you take the front wheel for a while, while I lay back for a bit?